The Ramana Maharshi self-inquiry meditation inspired my “Who am I?” poem. I send massive gratitude to Ramana Maharshi for inspiring me to shape this poem.
– Who am I?
I was born in the city of Isfahan
That’s the place my parents met
They fell in love, danced the flame of love and drama kind of
– Who am I?
I am a daughter
A Sister
A lover
And a mother
– Who am I?
As a girl
I did not understand the feeling of inferiority.
How to accept the superiority
Or deal with authority.
I had a rebellious point of view.
A constant taboo
– Who am I?
As a daughter, I watched my mother and father.
A woman was supposed to stand by her man
Follow the clan
Stand like a cliff
Never show her grief.
And the men, as a part of the ban
He had to live as a man
Never less than
Never show his grief
He had to live for that belief
The anger, though, was an accepted brief
Or part of a higher relief?
That made men chief
– Who am I?
As an adult woman
I had to reframe
How to be brave and play the game
I have to manoeuvre my flame
My Claim
The right to be a woman without all the shame and the blame
All around the world
We are all the same
Women wearing jewels
Everybody follows the rules
Playing the perfect game
To suit the surroundings and not break the patriarchal frame
I wish all the readers and writers of the Wise and Shine blogger community a merry and blissful Christmas.
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“I have to manoeuvre my flame.” Such powerful words! We most manoeuvre or the flame will be extinguished—much to the joy of many. Merry Christmas to you, Parisa!
It is so true Michelle!!
Thank you so much for you reading the poem and your Words, Michelle. I also wish you a wonderful Christmas.
Strong poem and thanks for introducing me to the song as well- very cool! 😎
I am happy that you liked the song, Todd! I do like it as well.
Thank you for reading the Poem and for your comment on it, based on your experience of it. I also wish you a merry and happy Christmas!
What a beautiful rhythm and snapshot of identity, Parisa!
Thank you Wynne for this comment. Snapshot of identity. I have tasted the Word “snapshot of identity” and it tastes so delicious.
Beautiful, you too have a beautiful awesome Christmas
Thank you for reading it and I am delighted that you liked it. Merry Christmas to you as well and happy blessed holidays.
Merry Christmas to you and your family 🎊
Wow, what a powerful and full of life poem Parisa! Have a peaceful Christmas dear !
Same to you dear Cristiana. Thanks for reading it, by the way, and your comment.