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English is not my mother tongue, but I deeply enjoy writing and poetry. Often, the words come to me as if they are being channeled through me, flowing onto the page, and I play with them. However, afterward, I wonder—am I expressing this in the right way in English?

Therefore, I turn to ChatGPT to refine my expression, comparing different versions to see which one resonates best. Now, I ask you— which version speaks to you the most? Please be honest.

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Come on people, let’s fly high
Stop clinging to all the denies

Freeing ourselves from all the lies
All the betrays that sell our souls to the BIG bad guys

Let’s free ourselves from all that has been told us
about our human history, who we are and what we are capable of

Let’s spread our wings and fly towards the blue sky

Start looking at life through the eagles eyes

Come on folk
Let’s get through the needles eyes
And make the impossible look like a fool and arise

Come on girls and boys of new generation
You are the hope of coming nations

Without burdening yourselves with expectations
Get guidance through leaning jnto trust, compassion, acceptance and utilising your unique creation

So we can get to the shore of lightness and oneness stop being divided by all the deception
That divide us as humans
And giving birth to a total new conception

Title: “Fly High: A Call for Awakening”

⸻ ChatGPTS version

Come on, people, let’s fly high,
Stop clinging to each old deny.

Free ourselves from all the lies,
From betrayals that sell our souls to the big bad guys.

Let’s break free from all we’re told,
About our history, who we are, and what we hold.

Let’s spread our wings and touch the sky,
See the world through eagle’s eye.

Come on, folks, let’s find a way,
Through the needle’s eye today.

Make the impossible look like a fool,
Rise above and break the rule.

Come on, girls and boys—new generation,
You are the hope of coming nations.

Without the weight of expectation,
Find your path through trust, creation,

Through love, compassion, and acceptance true,
Let your light come shining through.

So we may reach the shore of light,
No longer bound by blind divide.

Let’s give birth to something new,
A world united, whole, and true.

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